A Gift of Flowers
(Poem)
[ A lover youth
replies to his lover when he received a gift of flowers from her. ]
Darling, I welcome the lovely gift
As symbol of your love
to me.
I don’t know how to
convey my joy
And don’t know how to
express thanks!
The aroma comes out
from these
Is really the fragrance
of your love.
My sweetheart, the
fragrance of love
Can’t be hidden and it
will come out!
Let me tell you my
dear that my mind
Will be with you
wherever you are,
As a cool breeze that
reaches your
Heart slowly slowly with a feather-touch!
7 comments:
wow... very lovely poem, dr kumar! i love your choice of words, they rhyme together... good one!
Thank you very much, Jonald. I am glad to know that you enjoyed my poem. Thanks again.
Let me tell you my dear that my mind
Will be with you wherever you are,
As a cool breeze that reaches your
Heart slowly slowly with a feather-touch!
Oh Doctor You are a very Good romantic poet......... God bless You.....
A friend writes:
Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery Nice my dear keep it UP! the nice and creative piece...........
THANKS, MY FRIEND.
Nalina Chechi, Thank you very much.
Bindu Shivashankaran Nair writes:
Gud one!!!
Thank u v much, Bindu.
Hmmm.....Amazing !!! Very Romantic !!!
Acha, very nice...This is one of ur best poems ! Congratulations !
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